Homerun
When I hear a the crack of the bat,
It’s 3 years ago,
crack, the ball is hit,
it goes toward third,
it hits a runner,
The runner is not called out,
the runner scores the winning run,
we lose our first game of the season,
but that is not my story,
my story is,
it’s a 2-2 pitch,
the ball comes streaking toward the plate,
I swing,
crack, the ball goes flying
through the cloudy sky,
it lands deep in the green grass outfield
as I sprint around the bases,
I reach home base
long before the ball does,
it’s my
first
homerun
of the
season
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